📝 Avoid confusingly complex sentences that slow down the reading process and create distance from the action.
🖋️ Break up lengthy sentences into smaller ones to improve readability and create a more immersive experience for the reader.
🔤 Set the tone of your writing through intentional word choices.
💡 Choosing the right words can greatly impact the tone and vibe of your writing.
💡 Avoid using passive voice in your sentences to strengthen your writing.
💡 Remove filtering to create a more immersive reading experience.
📝 Avoid using filtering words like 'saw', 'smelled', and 'thought' to create a more immersive reading experience.
🌟 Use sensory details and eliminate filtering words to engage the reader and make the writing feel more immediate.
⏱️ Sentence length can help set the tone and mood of a scene, with longer sentences for introspective moments and shorter sentences for intense or immediate situations.
⏱️ Short, choppier sentences create a sense of tension and urgency, while longer sentences work better for introspection and sensory descriptions.
📚 Sentence length can vary to control pacing and add depth to writing.
💪 Avoid using body parts as the subject of sentences and reduce the use of 'was ing' constructions for stronger writing.
✍️ Use natural wording and avoid unnecessary complexity to make writing feel more accessible.
❌ Cut unnecessary similes that do not add meaningful information or enhance understanding.
🔍 Similes should aim to enhance understanding of unfamiliar concepts or set the mood/tone.
📝 Similes can enhance mood and make the reading experience more evocative and visceral.
📚 The complexity of vocabulary can impact the reading speed, with advanced vocabulary slowing down the reader.
🔍 Books with simpler vocabulary can still be mature and interesting, but are generally read faster.
❌ Avoid starting actions with characters in writing.
💡 Avoid using unnecessary words that don't add meaning or enhance understanding.
💡 Cutting out unnecessary words reduces distance from the action and creates a cleaner writing style.
💡 Unnecessary directional or location-based descriptions can clutter writing and should be minimized.